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Steal your breath away
Steel the air and say
What you want to say

He is your love, but your love is cold
She is you love, but love runs cold
Icy lips to lips, heart left frozen
Freezing the blood in your veins

Steal your breath away
On a winter day
You want to stay

Time is irrelevant, it's going to be a long winter
Dark but iridiscent, it's going to be a cold December
Icy lips to lips, heart left to stall and stutter
Frozen limbs try not to crack or shatter

Steel the air and say
What you want to say
If you have to today

Blankets and jackets do little
To hold you inside
Watch as the sun sets
Embrace the night
It's going to be a long winter
And you want it that way
It's going to be a cold winter
Wouldn't have it any other way

Steal your breath away
Steel the air and say
What you want to say
©2009-2010 =Vindicta38
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Author's Comments

Inspired by WinterBoys by *EatingMyOwnFears.

I just couldn't walk away from that piece without trying something. :nod: I've always been fascinated by images of cold and winter for use in poems for some reason. :XD:

Hope you enjoy it! :)

(Also, please read that poem and fav it if you enjoy it. ;) )

:icondonotuseplz::iconmyartplz:

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:iconrenegade-angel23:
Gorgeous!

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I reject your reality and substitute my own - Adam - Mythbusters
:iconvindicta38:
Thank you! :aww:

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Words do my bidding! ....... Sometimes...
:iconrenegade-angel23:
My pleasure :D

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I reject your reality and substitute my own - Adam - Mythbusters
:iconcartheinsane:
I like the word "iridescent". :giggle:

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~I am a poet~
:iconvindicta38:
I do too, it's a great word! :lol:

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Words do my bidding! ....... Sometimes...
:iconhippievan57:
nice work and way cool inspiration!

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War is not healthy for children and other living things ...

~peace, love and groovy stuff~
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:iconvindicta38:
Thanks! :D

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Words do my bidding! ....... Sometimes...
:iconhippievan57:
you're welcome :D

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War is not healthy for children and other living things ...

~peace, love and groovy stuff~
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