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You haven't lived until you've heard Heart-Shaped Box
On an old CD/Cassette boombox
Cobain shouts his complaint
Meat-eating orchids drag me under
A generation of long-lost angst
A lesson learned I won't soon forget

It wasn't all worthless...

Sue us for our piracy
Share your love with me
Deny I never existed
Cigarette burns on my this
I love you and I am not

You can't really bleed unless your anemic
Otherwise you're fake and don't know it
You've been flogged by licorice whips so long
You've forgotten what it tastes like to hear a real song

It wasn't all worthless...

You spend all your time acting like you're not naive
You've turned a blind eye to your childhood in the 90's
You don't like it when the only truth you can see
Is the only thing you'll never be

It wasn't all worthless...

Sue us for our piracy
Share your love with me
Deny I never existed
Cigarette burns on my this
I love you and I am not
©2009-2010 =Vindicta38
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Author's Comments

One of my novelty pieces.

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Critiques


:iconcartheinsane:
I think the last stanza that is repeated 3 times throughout the poem is a good stanza, BUT I think 2 repetitions would be enough. I think it would probably be best if you removed the one in the middle. Either way, it is still marvelous, marvelous piece. I find it fun and I love the first stanza especially. Very descriptive and really pulls me in. I can feel what it would be like to listen to that good song.

I love "Meat-eating orchids drag me under" and "A generation of long-lost angst." Very well done. Great job. Marvelous job.
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:iconninjaelixd:
I still have Nevermind on vinyl... too bad my needle's worn down XD

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W+M1 FOR GREAT JUSTICE!!!!!1!
:iconvindicta38:
:XD: Lucky! I'd kill to have a turntable! :lmao:

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Words do my bidding! ....... Sometimes...
:iconninjaelixd:
well yeah... bu now I can't find anywhere that sells new needles... it saddens me :(

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W+M1 FOR GREAT JUSTICE!!!!!1!
:iconvindicta38:
Go to a pawn shop or Google vintage repair shops. :XD:

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Words do my bidding! ....... Sometimes...
:iconninjaelixd:
I don't like buying stuff online and I am tooooooo lazy to go to a pawn shop...

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W+M1 FOR GREAT JUSTICE!!!!!1!
:iconvindicta38:
Laziness killed you in the end. :XD:

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Words do my bidding! ....... Sometimes...
:iconninjaelixd:
and It always will XD

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W+M1 FOR GREAT JUSTICE!!!!!1!
:iconcartheinsane:
I like this one. Especially the beginning. :meow:

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~I am a poet~

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