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You're the reason I feel pain
And every night, I die again
You're the reason I feel outdated
And every night, I expire again
I'm screaming louder for your amusement
I'm moving over for your convenience

Soldering
Smoldering
Shouldering
The weight you give me
Soldering
Smoldering
Shouldering
What else can I do?


You're the person I hate least
And every night you make me speak
You're the one who hates opinions
From my mouth, I am your puppet
I'm screaming louder for your amusement
I'm moving over for your convenience

Soldering
Smoldering
Shouldering
The weight you give me
Soldering
Smoldering
Shouldering
What else can I do?


I like to pretend I'm better than that
I like to pretend it's nothing that
Can hurt me, but I promise that
I love you, can you promise that?

I like to pretend I'm better than that
I like to pretend it's nothing that
Can hurt me, but I promise that
I love you, can you promise that?

You're the reason I have no mind
And every night I try to find it
You're the person who needs me
To dance upon your puppet strings
You're the person I wish that I
Could send out to the streets to die
You're the person I love the most
And now I feel my time is lost...
©2009-2010 =Vindicta38
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Author's Comments

As conflicting as it is, I guess it would go under the "Romantic" category. :XD:

Inspired by Nirvana's song, Verse Chorus Verse, which you can hear, here: [link]

As soon as I heard the rhythm of the lyrics, even if I couldn't understand them, I began to write this. I did take the "You're the reason I feel pain" part though. It stuck out, a lot. :XD:

It's a good song musically, so please give it a listen. :nod: It's the best way to understand my writing process. :nod:

:icondonotuseplz::iconmyartplz:

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I like it. :D

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:D Thanks!

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